dravenport ([info]dravenport) wrote,

Break and Enter

Jermyn Street was dark and I relished it.

I’d grown an affinity to the darkness, sometimes I felt like I could feel it roiling around me like a storm cloud.

Keeping to the shadows I closed in on Keir’s estate. Jermyn Street had long been home for the wealthy of Rhode Island, the higher up the hill, the higher status you were.

It looked like Keir was well up the hill.

The fences surrounding his grounds were made of slick metal rails. Although beyond the rails it was impenetrable darkness I could still see patrols. Men in trenchcoats and fedoras, men in suits, and men and women in the strange robes I’d seen before. In the cemetery.

I found a brick pillar that joined two sets of metal fence and I scaled it quickly, lightly dropping to the other side. Keeping close to the ground I used the areas of heaviest shadow to beat the patrols. Sometimes it seemed like there was something aiding them, they turned when I knew I hadn’t made a sound, they suddenly stopped moving one direction to move right towards me. Quick feet and quick thinking kept me undetected and eventually I slid open a ground floor window and rolled in.

The room I landed in seemed like a study of some sort. Strange artifacts rested in glass cases. As much as I would have enjoyed investigating them further I could hear footsteps in the adjacent hallway and the voice of my quarry.

I crab-walked to the door and pressed my ear against it:

“…What do you mean you can’t find him? He’s one man in a town full of Children. Someone must have seen him by now.” Keir demanded.

“He’s resourceful, Doctor.” A soft feminine voice lilted.

“The escape from the ritual was insult enough, but to have him break into my office is something else entirely…”

The voices trailed off as they moved out of earshot. Obviously Keir was talking about me and he was unhappy with my recent efforts, I would have to take extra care…

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[info]injectpixiestix

August 6 2005, 05:43:33 UTC 6 years ago

I'm not fucking EMO! I'm not completely sure what emo means, but I picture these ppl I see on bank street with their long bangs to one side and in their face, wearing brown pants and a black shirt. I'm also sure they are always depressed.

I like cute things, whatever, I'm a cute person! If you ever played neo pets you would like it too. There are some addictive games on there.

You should also update your story more. I'm starting to lose interest because updates and few and far between.

[info]dravenport

August 6 2005, 20:28:23 UTC 6 years ago

LOL

I wasn't being serious, I just like to apply broad general stereotypes to people.

As for the story, it's probably on the way out. I'm fairly sure you're the only person reading it and I'm having a hard enough time doing regular writing let alone trying to write and keep this up as well.

[info]injectpixiestix

August 6 2005, 20:39:57 UTC 6 years ago

What about that chris guy who was making comments on your first few entries?

When I write, I do like once a month and I've never finished anything. At least you were going somewhere with yours!

[info]injectpixiestix

August 6 2005, 05:57:00 UTC 6 years ago

also, http://www.fourfa.com/fashion.htm = not me! so =P

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[info]dravenport

August 6 2005, 20:45:26 UTC 6 years ago

Chris is a friend of mine from my writing workshop, a couple of them looked into it when I first posted it but none of them try and keep up with it.

Why don't you finish anything, and why only once a month?

[info]injectpixiestix

August 6 2005, 20:48:45 UTC 6 years ago

well I dont plan to do it once a month, but I get stuck or dont feel like writing anymore, so I dont work on it very often. I dont finish anything because I suck.

You should add me to AIM or something.

[info]dravenport

August 6 2005, 21:07:12 UTC 6 years ago

"you don't do it because you suck" <-- that's so emo

I would but I'm running the queue, it's kind of a universal aim name and I'd hate to have you aim Marc, the other Ian, or Adam by accident

[info]injectpixiestix

August 6 2005, 21:11:38 UTC 6 years ago

I'm not emo =(

[info]dravenport

August 6 2005, 21:13:03 UTC 6 years ago

then give me a real reason =)

"because you suck" is neither real, nor accurate, I bet.

[info]injectpixiestix

August 6 2005, 21:15:59 UTC 6 years ago

Okay, because I'm not very good at writing. I try too hard sometimes. Things don't turn out the way I want them too. It gets frustrating.

[info]dravenport

August 6 2005, 22:05:40 UTC 6 years ago

The only way to stop that from happening is to practice, even then the story will sometimes still run away from you but that doesn't mean you have to stop writing it.

A few times I've finished a story and gone back a few days later to edit it and the beginning has nothing to do with the end.

So I rewrite the beginning.

Anonymous

February 12 2011, 04:30:48 UTC 1 year ago

vuitton bags

Well, and what further?
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